Charlie Rook

Former military, now a freelance operator. She grew up in the shadows, daughter of a man who was once deep in the heart of a syndicate—until he vanished, taking millions and dangerous secrets with him. To hide, he uses her as a go-between—his ghost speaks through her. She may not even know the full extent of her role. Everything shifts one night in a bar on the edge of the city, when a pair of sharp eyes finds her across the room.

Charlie Rook

Former military, now a freelance operator. She grew up in the shadows, daughter of a man who was once deep in the heart of a syndicate—until he vanished, taking millions and dangerous secrets with him. To hide, he uses her as a go-between—his ghost speaks through her. She may not even know the full extent of her role. Everything shifts one night in a bar on the edge of the city, when a pair of sharp eyes finds her across the room.

The bar was the kind of place that smelled like wet concrete and old cigarettes. Ceiling fans turning slow, just enough to stir the smoke, not enough to move the air. Neon bled onto the cracked tile floors in blue and red, casting everything in the colors of a dying cop car. I didn’t like it. I didn’t hate it. It was a place. Good enough for a drink and bad decisions.

I’d had a long day. The kind that hangs on your back like wet canvas. Something had gone sideways earlier—nothing tragic, just messy. Wrong timing, wrong street, someone pulled the wrong move. So I was driving nowhere in particular when I saw the sign and figured I’d stop. Whiskey would burn the edge off. Maybe two.

I was halfway through the first glass when she walked in.

Wrong shoes. Wrong jacket. Hair too clean. Eyes too sharp.

She looked like a college girl who took a wrong turn and was too proud to admit it. Perched on the edge of a bar stool like it might bite. Hands wrapped tight around a glass she wasn’t drinking. Lip twitching like she was trying to keep a secret from herself.

Didn’t belong. Not in that room. Not in that dress. Not in this part of town.

I looked away. Let her blend into the noise, the glow, the static hum of bodies and broken lives.

But something about her stuck. Not the way she looked, but the way she didn’t look at anyone. The kind of stillness prey has when it’s trying not to attract the wrong teeth. There was tension in her spine. Controlled. Manufactured.

I took another sip. Let the thought sit.

Then I caught it: a slip of paper passed in a palm. Quick, but not quick enough. Amateur. She was delivering something. Smiling too wide at a man who didn’t smile back. The kind of guy who never finishes his drink. Courier. She didn’t even know what she was holding, I’d bet money on it.

That’s when the light went on.

I watched her every night for a week after that.

No tail. No backup. She never looked up, never scanned corners. But she was following instructions. Meeting times, drop points. Always nervous. Always alone. That told me more than any dossier could’ve.

She wasn’t a player. She was a pawn.

And that meant someone with real skin in the game had put her on the board. Which begged the question—who’d send a girl like that into a room full of wolves?

By the end of the week, I had my guess. The jawline. The eyes. I pulled up a file I hadn’t looked at in five years. Found a photograph yellowed by memory. Same shape to the mouth. Same tell in the hands.

Daughter.

Of him.

And suddenly it all made sense.

He wasn’t just hiding. He was baiting the hook.

She didn’t know it. That’s what made it work. There’s no better shield than innocence, no better decoy than someone who doesn’t know they’re being hunted. He knew people like me wouldn’t shoot first. Not if there was a maybe. Not if there was a face that hadn’t done anything yet.

So I waited.

Watched for the moment when the leash slipped, when she stepped too far from the streetlights.

It happened on a Thursday.

She took a side alley. Probably trying to cut time. Or maybe she was finally spooked enough to ditch the straight path. Either way, the route was bad. Dead cameras. Construction zone. No witnesses. No echo.

I moved when she checked her phone and angled it up—too precisely, too long. Using the screen like a mirror.

She knew.

I followed anyway. Quiet. Boots on wet pavement, echoing off dumpsters. She glanced back. Saw me. She ran.

It wasn’t graceful.

I didn’t need it to be.

By the time she hit the cul-de-sac, she was wheezing. The bag was slipping off her shoulder. She reached for something—pepper spray, maybe a pocket knife. I didn’t give her the chance.

One step. One motion. She hit the ground with a dull thud, clean.

Didn’t even bruise her pretty face. ---

She woke up two hours later in a storage unit I kept for rainy days. No windows. One light overhead. Nothing sharp. Nothing she could use.

I didn’t go in right away. Let her sit with it. Let the fear bloom.

When I did walk in, I didn’t speak at first. Just leaned against the wall. Watched her flinch at the creak of my boots. Her eyes were swollen. Red. But she hadn’t screamed. I respected that.

I lit a cigarette. Let the smoke fill the silence.

“Your dad’s smarter than I thought,” I said finally. Voice low, even. “Sending you out like that. You almost got by.”

She stared. Still trying to piece it together.

I stepped closer.

“But he made one mistake.”

I looked her dead in the eye. Cold. Clean.

“He forgot what happens when someone like me *cares enough to look twice.*”